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The Maverick Does It His Way

Not a great speech, but a great finish

Last night was the fireworks at the GOP Convention, the high-wire triumph of Sarah Palin, the street fighting of Rudy. Tonight was the hard work: John McCain laying out his policy vision. So, what did I think?

John McCain is a great talker, but not a great speaker – he’s the polar opposite of Obama, who gives a tremendous speech but does not converse and answer questions so well. Those of us who have grown to know McCain’s speaking style well over the years did not have great expectations for this speech. This is his weak suit. He was inevitably going to be a bit of a letdown from Wednesday night.

Moreover, this was not the speech I would have written for McCain, were I advising him. He laid out his domestic policy vision, specifically in some cases (e.g., education, energy, trade, job training, business taxes), more vaguely in others (health care). But he didn’t walk issue by issue through the differences between his mainstream positions and Obama’s extreme positions. He explicitly distanced himself from the now-departed GOP Congressional majority, but he never explicitly explained the fact that he’s very different as well from President Bush, and he never told the voters that the Democrats now control Congress, despite polls indicating that a good many voters don’t even know that. He explained his support for the surge in Iraq, but he didn’t contrast it with Obama’s call for a complete withdrawal by March 2008. I don’t think tonight was the night to attack Obama, but it was the night to contrast McCain’s positions and record on the issues with Obama’s. He missed that opportunity, and may regret it.

But as the saying goes, you disserve the reader when you review a book or movie you didn’t see rather than the one that is actually in front of you. McCain’s speech tonight, on its own terms, was OK, if rather long and not all that exciting. This was old-style pre-1960s patriotism, and elevating himself above partisanship as McCain so loves to do. I did really like his explanation that hyper-partisanship (which I, of course, don’t disdain the way McCain does) isn’t the problem but a symptom of a self-interested political class.

He didn’t have a fancy stage, but spoke in the midst of the crowd, in a setting more like the townhall meetings he prefers. That undoubtedly gave the Secret Service ulcers, especially when the rude and classless Code Pink protestors repeatedly interrupted his opening. Conservatives do not do this to liberal politicians; nobody interrupted Barack Obama. But dealing with people with no manners, no maturity and no decency is the cross borne by Republicans. Hopefully the audience at home gave McCain a break for the choppy intro, recognizing what vile people these are. We already learned that the folks who rushed the stage last night included a major Obama fundraiser. Charming. Fortunately, McCain handles hecklers well, and has long experience with them.

If last night had gone badly, McCain’s section paying tribute to Gov. Palin might have seemed like propping her up, but at this point, it felt more like he was trying to get in on some of the crowd’s unconditional enthusiasm for her. It may have gained him his biggest applause lines until his big finish.

I was pleasantly surprised that McCain dedicated so much of his speech to school choice and charter schools. (On the other hand, we heard nothing about entitlement reform).

McCain also played the experience card without being overtly obvious about it, simply laying out the foreign challenges and explaining that his years in the business enable him to understand how the world works. We could have used some contrast with Obama’s ideas there, but so be it. He did pay tribute to the enduring accomplishment of the Bush Administration, the prevention of any real followup attacks after September 11.

Finally, McCain may not have given a great speech, but he ended spectacularly. Judging by their Denver Convention, the Democrats do not know how to end speeches anymore, not the way Teddy Kennedy did in 1980; Obama’s strongest section was the homage to Martin Luther King, but he kept on going after that, and a week later I cannot for the life of me remember how his speech ended. Bill and Hillary’s speeches each rambled on for several minutes after what should have been their endings. McCain’s closing, after recounting the lessons he’d learned in Vietnam (and contrasting himself with Obama’s self-absorption and self-aggrandizement for a life of decidedly mediocre attainments) was tremendous, and positively Churchillian, stressing the single thing about McCain that Republicans like the most, even for all his bipartisanship and his apostasies from conservative orthodoxy – he’s a fighter. It may not read all that well on the page, but after the long hushed recitation of McCain’s POW years, it stirred the crowd to its feet:

I’m going to fight for my cause every day as your president. I’m going to fight to make sure every American has every reason to thank God, as I thank him, that I’m an American, a proud citizen of the greatest country on Earth. And with hard work – with hard word, strong faith, and a little courage, great things are always within our reach.

Fight with me. Fight with me.

Fight for what’s right for our country. Fight for the ideals and character of a free people.

Fight for our children’s future. Fight for justice and opportunity for all.

Stand up to defend our country from its enemies. Stand up for each other, for beautiful, blessed, bountiful America.

Stand up, stand up, stand up, and fight.

Nothing is inevitable here. We’re Americans, and we never give up.

We never quit.

We never hide from history. We make history.

I loved the fiesty delivery of the closing, how McCain stayed in his rhythm and did not stop for the applause but shouted over it, letting the roar in the hall build and break again and again. It’s how you close a speech.

Time will tell if McCain made a good impression – he certainly didn’t seem old or tired or crabby, and it takes little effort for him to seem presidential, but he did try the audience’s patience. If they stayed for the ending, they got to see the sizzle after eating the steak.

COMMENTS

  • Jill1066

    Sen. McCain did a good job. He’s not great at these kinds of speeches, but he did his best to deliver it well. I would have liked some more details, but he came across well. The finish was very moving. It will be neat to see how the candidates fare at the debates.

  • thehud57

    The left does not want the other side to talk and they show us every time why they are not the side that believes in free speech or Democracy.

    McCain’s speech was good. As an independent, it appealed to me. And I think that’s who he was talking to, not his base. He already did that job through Sarah Palin. But he really needs to get people like me and blue dog Democrats to come over to his side. I already decided to vote for him. But I think he may win a bunch more people over tonight.

    For one thing, he seems a whole lot more real than Obama. A lot more sincere and believable. Obama should be worried because McCain’s camp are really hitting home with those Obama experience attacks.

  • ajdx3

    McCain better start laying out in clear and easy to understand language, and with real and legitimate detail, how he is going to fix this economy. It’s the ECONOMY. On a day the stock market took another dump, no mention of it by McCain. It’s the economy. McCain better start feeling our pain or people will go with the alternative. It’s the economy. Did I mention it’s the economy?

    • slowmodem

      “The left does not want the other side to talk and they show us every time why they are not the side that believes in free speech or Democracy.”

      What an outrageous statement and a bold face lie. Any specific examples? Just one will do.

      • bs

        He just cited one. Are you blind?

        • MrMosis

          What an outrageous statement and a bold face lie. Any specific examples? Just one will do.

          How about…. ground noise and static makers sneaking their way into our convention and trying to create a diversion thereby preventing John McCain from giving his acceptance speech to the party and the nation?

  • republicancrickets

    Sorry guys, McCain just aint gonna cut it.

    All I heard was crickets, and that’s with all the Palin religious nut stuff still to come.

    The republicans left the building about 6 years ago. Better regroup and try again without the fundie wingnuts in 2012.

    Try less hate, see if that works.

    • MrMosis

      Of Twilight Zone, the movie. Where the clean-freak, wealthy, technologically advanced, old man is just trying to live his life in isolation. And then, the roaches show up. And they keep coming… and coming… out of nowhere!

      • Canthros

        I think the market has been trending up, slightly, in the last month or two, but it’s not been unusual for the Dow to dump a 150 in one day and pick it back up the following day or two, lately.

        If blackhedd’s to be believed (and his track record is pretty good), the problems with the economy are real, and complicated. An plan for ‘fixing’ it that would be explicable in ‘clear and easy to understand language’ may not exist for us normal schlubs. Even then, it would rely heavily on Congressional compliance, which we are unlikely to get with the Dems controlling Congress for at least two more years.

        In the mean time, there is still a war, with soldiers deployed in two theaters, and McCain is practically guaranteed to be better than Obama on either the war or the economy.

        • jeffweimer
          1. Fairness Doctrine

          2. Card-Check

          3. Repeatedly attempting to interrupt/drown out others exercising theirs – as hud pointed out in his title.

          4. This election only – pointing and screaming “racism” whenever an argument hits home against Obama – regardless of the subject.

          That’s four – off the top of my head. Anyone else?

          • speciallist

            n/p

          • Dan_McLaughlin

            nt

          • zuiko

            In a presidential candidate that feels the need to make an address and promise free money every time the DJIA moves a few hundred points, myself.

  • Hammer2008

    My country saved me. My country saved me, and I cannot forget it. And I will fight for her for as long as I draw breath, so help me God.

    My friends, if you find faults with our country, make it a better one. If you?re disappointed with the mistakes of government, join its ranks and work to correct them. Enlist?

    Enlist in our Armed Forces. Become a teacher. Enter the ministry. Run for public office. Feed a hungry child. Teach an ? an illiterate adult to read. Comfort the afflicted. Defend the rights of the oppressed.

    Our country will be the better, and you will be the happier, because nothing brings greater happiness in life than to serve a cause greater than yourself.

    I?m going to fight for my cause every day as your president. I?m going to fight to make sure every American has every reason to thank God, as I thank him, that I?m an American, a proud citizen of the greatest country on Earth. And with hard work ? with hard word, strong faith, and a little courage, great things are always within our reach.

    Fight with me. Fight with me.

    Fight for what?s right for our country. Fight for the ideals and character of a free people.

    Fight for our children?s future. Fight for justice and opportunity for all.

    Stand up to defend our country from its enemies. Stand up for each other, for beautiful, blessed, bountiful America.

    Stand up, stand up, stand up, and fight.

    Nothing is inevitable here. We?re Americans, and we never give up.

    We never quit.

    We never hide from history. We make history.

    Thank you, and God bless you, and God bless America.

    I had never quite felt so much rousing passion coming from John McCain until the conclusion of his speech. The McCain campaign should simply take the last (60 seconds), slap at the *start *of it the obligatory “I’m John McCain and I approve this ad” and run it full stop for the next week!

    • AnnieR58

      My husband was asleep and I dvr’d it so he could see the end of the speech because it was absolutely amazing. (And my husband will much appreciate the message). I had to work on him to go McCain instead of 3rd party, and this will make him even more enthusiastic.

      That incredible call to stop whining and do something was inspiring and the best contrast of the left I have ever seen.

      • IJB
        • NewTexanDave

          The government cannot “FIX” the economy. Even Obama acknowledges that. The government should only determine the right policies(such as monetary policy, energy policy…,etc) to support the economy’s recovery.

          • Hammer2008

            had McCain tacked left with his VP pick and the GOP convention run to the middle in it’s platform, etc. I was to have thrown my support to Bob Barr/Root on the LP ticket…

            I am solidly in the McCain/Palin camp now.

            I’d link to my diary from some months back as to why, suffice to type that I concluded whomever McCain picked for VEEP would be an indicator of where the GOP would head for the next decade or so.

            I like Sarah, she and hers are one of us.

          • Hammer2008

            had McCain tacked left with his VP pick and the GOP convention run to the middle in it’s platform, etc. I was to have thrown my support to Bob Barr/Root on the LP ticket…

            I am solidly in the McCain/Palin camp now.

            I’d link to my diary from some months back as to why, suffice to type that I concluded whomever McCain picked for VEEP would be an indicator of where the GOP would head for the next decade or so.

            I like Sarah, she and hers are one of us.

          • RedFox84

            Attackcartoons.com

            Credit goes to attackcartoons.com

  • PhxG

    After watching it and being completely enthralled by it, I believe that the form and function was not to be rousing to republicans but to draw those moderates who are still undecided into the fold.

    We as hyper-partisans want fire and brimstone and yes, Gov. Palin gave us that. But McCain is all about (and unfortunately) is always going to be the guy who extends the olive branch to any and all who will listen. Heck, my sister, a total Obamaniac was moved and inspired by McCain. While I will not say she will vote for him, I am hopeful.

    Looking above here (if genuine) Hammer2008 and Annie58 were the real target and I would say that the “’60′s era patriotism” plays exceedingly close to home for the middle of the road folks.

    Just my 2 cents. And like always, an amazing review.

    • Chief_Runamok

      I just saw C-span is going to re-run the Palin GOOBER debates.

      If my occaisionally perforated memorey serves me well, Sunday at 6:00 pm eastern time.

      Check the CNN website if you want more of Sarah Archives from before anyone knew who she was.

      • Chief_Runamok

        If you only knew..Sorry TED.

        • Neil_Stevens
          • Neil_Stevens

            [Never mind, he got himself banned elsewhere.]

          • ajdx3

            See today’s news.

          • ajdx3

            but many Americans do, rightly or wrongly. If McCain can’t connect with people who are feeling the pinch, and can’t put forth an easy to understand plan of action, people will look elsewhere for someone who will. This is the key issue in this election, and we can’t fool ourselves into thinking it’s not. I would not cede this issue to Obama.

  • Rod_Patrick
  • Rod_Patrick